These look great, but what size are these? Is this the format we are supposed to submit in? My only comment is to make the text a little more inviting to read. But I guess I'd have to see it on the ipad template to really judge the readability. Something to keep in mind then?
I'm digging the layouts, but I'm not really seeing how they're gonna be interactive/amimated/ipaddy. Perhaps in the final, you could make the picture bars scroll? I dunno.
I think is great that you have the idea to complete the whole article. for your first layout (top) I'd like to see some interactivity with the pictures at the bottom. They seem cropped at the sides, and it would be fun to show more pictures as they scroll horizontally on the bottom pictures. If you decide to do so, just remember that you need an icon to let people know that some interaction is going on. :) -Astrid
These look great, but what size are these? Is this the format we are supposed to submit in? My only comment is to make the text a little more inviting to read. But I guess I'd have to see it on the ipad template to really judge the readability. Something to keep in mind then?
ReplyDelete-Chris E
I'm digging the layouts, but I'm not really seeing how they're gonna be interactive/amimated/ipaddy. Perhaps in the final, you could make the picture bars scroll? I dunno.
ReplyDeleteLooks good overall though.
I like the way the layouts look, but I feel like it would be too much scrolling. Maybe try to find a way to break the type up into sections...
ReplyDelete- Cally
Hi,
ReplyDeleteI think is great that you have the idea to complete the whole article. for your first layout (top) I'd like to see some interactivity with the pictures at the bottom. They seem cropped at the sides, and it would be fun to show more pictures as they scroll horizontally on the bottom pictures. If you decide to do so, just remember that you need an icon to let people know that some interaction is going on. :)
-Astrid