I like the comic book concept, it really fits the movies. That said, the images themselves don't really seem comic book-y to me. Perhaps if they were heavily outlines or had a halftone screen or something.
And part of me thinks the View Askew line would look better if the entire thing was offset on the same cut but that's probably a non issue.
as far as the comic book style goes, the last two work, but the rats aren't in that same technique. I'd hate to trace rat fur, but you might just have to instead of live tracing it. I agree with alina, the text is hard to read on the wallpaper background, maybe if you made a tear? or if that doesnt work, have the same stripes that are consistent in the first two. these are really cool directions, just keep strengthening them
I like the comic book concept, it really fits the movies. That said, the images themselves don't really seem comic book-y to me. Perhaps if they were heavily outlines or had a halftone screen or something.
ReplyDeleteAnd part of me thinks the View Askew line would look better if the entire thing was offset on the same cut but that's probably a non issue.
like the bg of the first one and your illustrations. The last one has a unique bg but hard to read the small text.
ReplyDeleteas far as the comic book style goes, the last two work, but the rats aren't in that same technique. I'd hate to trace rat fur, but you might just have to instead of live tracing it. I agree with alina, the text is hard to read on the wallpaper background, maybe if you made a tear? or if that doesnt work, have the same stripes that are consistent in the first two. these are really cool directions, just keep strengthening them
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i like the simplicity of the first one because the bg works the best. maybe have them all have the striped bg with different color palette
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